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Thanks for stopping by!  I’m very excited because the cover for my WIP, The Light Within Me, will be done by the end of the week!

This week I’m continuing with said WIP.  Noah is a warrior from another universe down here on Earth hunting some pretty bad dudes of his race.  He is a man dedicated to his mission and has never swayed from it, until he met Abby.

Noah has just ceremoniously dumped Abby, but he’s not happy about it.

 

He threw open the door to his room and slammed it shut.  He plopped down on the edge of his bed and put his elbows on his knees, his head in his hands, his breath sawing in and out of his lungs.  Self-hatred bathed his very soul. Hatred for what he was, what he never could be.  He could never be a proper mate to Abby.  His duty to his own race would always have to come first.

 

I now return you to Six Sentence Sunday

4 thoughts on “Six Sentence Sunday – 10/2/11

  1. Aww, I love this kind of scene, tough guy breaks down and lets the reader in his true feelings. This sounds like a keeper. Well done. Loved this turn of phrase: “his breath sawing in and out of his lungs”

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